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Danit got the summer in her eyes. :)
[and the sky is spread over her dress :P]

gee... really been a while since i've upload a photo and i'm sorry. ><
its just that i dont have lot of motivation right now shooting people.
oh well, in june i will get a whole cool pretty NEW CAMERA!!!
yeahhh like a really hot camera and then i'll shoot lots of new pretty pictures! [hopefully] :D


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:iconogghunter:
no !!!
she has beautiful in her eyes !
Staggering !

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Kk ?? :P

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:iconroik:
tell that to her ;)

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:iconogghunter:
:P

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Kk ?? :P

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:iconmethatron-stock:
well, there is not much to say, the only thing i could add to that was like a black frame to the picture...it could make the whole image pop out a bit more, other than that, her expression is great, she's got lovelly eyes...the colours are good aswell, and the lighting, altough its a lil bit too much put on the side, its acceptable!
Just out of curiosity, change a bit the levels of the lighting, and try making it a bit darker then add a bit of contrast..see if u could boost up the colours a bit more not making it weird looking (u dont need to, coz its good as it is, its just out of curiosity to see if it can be improved!)
So i give u 18/20!
P.S: really try the black border frame on that...i think it could really help to boost it!

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:iconroik:
you're totally right!
i like it more with the frame :)

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:iconmethatron-stock:
:D glad i could help! :XD: the borders ALWAYS help to boost up the picture...either black borders to clear pics...or white borders to dark pics...:D

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:iconking-rastel:
Here is the constructive critique you wanted:

This piece has good focus, color saturation, and contrast. I think the composition is lacking something in balance. This would be a good shot for a typographic piece. It also has potential to do a photomanip of the clover patch next to the girl, like perhaps form a face or a symbol by rearranging select clovers to form it via dark and light clovers.

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:iconpetruva1991:
cool:)

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:icondreammiadream:
beutyfull blue eyes you've got there

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:iconarwen1112:
beautiful eyes, good choice of background :)

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May 26, 2008
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May 24, 2008, 5:23:08 PM

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